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Let's make a story! (1 paragraph at a time!)

Discussion in 'Game Corner' started by Mstri, Apr 16, 2017.

  1. Mstri

    Mstri ☙🏵Lɪꜰᴇ ɪs Fʟᴇᴇᴛɪɴɢ, Dᴇᴀá´

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    Hi there! Let's write a story together!
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    So I was trying to think of something fun to do, and I've finally come up with an idea!
    Let's all write a story together.
    Here is how this is going to work:
    There will be details and a topic written by me.
    Each of you will have to continue it but on one condition.
    You can only post 1 paragraph(4-8 sentences) at a time to continue it.
    Well. That's not the only rule. Here, lemme write the rules down for ya.
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    Rules:
    [​IMG]Please make sure to only post 4-8 sentences per contribution to the post.
    [​IMG]Try to make the story make sense. If you feel like the person above you doesn't make sense Dm them to see how they can improve! :)
    [​IMG]Please read what has already been written before posting!
    [​IMG]Anything not part of the story please put in brackets at the bottom of your post.
    [​IMG]Proper grammar and English please!
    [​IMG]Do not double post. You post, you wait for someone else to post, then you may post again.
    [​IMG]First person perspective please! Try to keep the perspective as Rulf!
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    Starting scene:
    Small hut in the middle of no where. Medieval times. Fantasy-like dimension.
    Goal:
    Complete 5 quests. Don't die.
    Character:
    Name: Rulf
    Gender: Male
    Age: 20
    Background: Lives alone, Isn't really good at anything, Wants to do something with his life
    Likes: Vegetables, adventure
    Dislikes: Dragons, Mortified of dragons
    Anything else: Has pet pig named Clove
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    Starting paragraph(s):
    Today was not a good morning for me, yet I felt confident. This morning I had a rough start. I'm sugar coating this a bit too much. This morning was dreadful. I fell out of bed as soon as I woke up. I burnt my tongue on my cabbage soup and then bit my cheek. Today just wasn't my day. But then something weird happened; I got mail.
    A pidgeon flew down into my window as I was wiping dust off of my arm and scared me half to death. I quickly swiped the parchment off of it's leg and read the note hastily.
    The note reads:
    Hello! Please collect some truffles for me. I will pay you in lots of coin for your duty!
    ~Julissa the bar maiden
    I scrunch my face up. This must've come to me on accident, surely. I set the piece of parchment down and stare outside.
    "Oink." I'm suddenly shocked out of my daydream. A snout is peeking through a hole in the door. Oh. That's right. I have a pig. Pigs can sniff out truffles. "Cloveeeeee," I yell out. The nose in the hole wiggles frantically. "Do you know what a truffle smells like?" I ask. More nose wiggling and snorts come through the hole in the door. "I'll take that as a yes!" I grab a piece of rope and head outside to Clove, tying it around her waist. "C'mon girl, lets go find some truffles. I think 5 should do it." I smile. An adventure really sounds nice.
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    I walked down streets to see if we can find any truffles. My pig, Clove, moved to right and then to left making sounds. I took it as a signal to follow. I hope I am right. As I walk parallel to the fence which seemed like a boundary of school, I saw something moving in bush. I wondered what it as I slowly start moving towards it.
     
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  4. Mstri

    Mstri ☙🏵Lɪꜰᴇ ɪs Fʟᴇᴇᴛɪɴɢ, Dᴇᴀá´

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    Clove sniffed around the search man's feet. "Excuse me, could you set over for a second?" I ask him. "Sure? What is that large creature?" He asked me. "A truffle finding machine!" I say, picking up a truffle by her nose. "Thank you for helping us with this quest, Mr search man!" I wave my back to him as we continue our hearty quest for truffles.
     
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    However, as I continue, a small, shadowy humanoid figure with glowing orange eyes appears in my path.

    "What do you want," I ask nervously.

    Your soul, It replies simply in my mind...as it attacks!
     

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