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Absence (Creepypasta~)

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by ScrafAndSigil, Mar 26, 2013.

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  1. ScrafAndSigil

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    A story I wrote on another forum, It was never completed, yet I would love for you all to read it!
    The day was nice. The sun was out, the shining dew on the green grass, yet it felt like something bad was going to happen, but it was uncertain. I kept my mouth shut as my partner a shiny Umbreon, walked next to me watching the low rustle of grass blow. The Pidoves flew making cooing sounds. The rustle of there feathers blocked everything as I heard a sudden crying. I questioned what was going on. I looked around it see a boy crying. I looked at him as he bawled. "What happend?" I said while Umbreon looked at him with pupils more slanted that normal. He said in a shaky, cold voice "D-don't go in the h-house." He pointed to were I was walking. "Uhm...Ok?" I said as I picked him up and gave him my Pidgeot. "Fly home and you can keep Pidgeot." I said while I walked away as he,shaking, walked over to Pidgeot and flew off. I walked forward Umbreon staying onguard. We came upon a house that looked black and dark. Umbreon's hairs went up as he stepped back. We slowly walked towards the door as something whamed into my head and I heard a "UMB!" as I slowly blacked out.
    I slowly woke to a dark, musty room. I saw I was chained down upon a cold steel wall almost. Umbreon was chained on a collar with spikes inward stabbing her neck. She didn't speak, Just whined. I heard a loud, blood-freezing shriek. I started to have bad pains in my chest and I started to breathe heavily. There were footsteps, crying, and Umbreon's whining. The door slowly opened. A dark figure stepped in. When I made out the shape of the dark figure I gasped and blinked. It was him, the all-mighty gym leader, Morty. His smile was cold, white, and his voice was warm and welcoming, but with a grim ring to it. He said in a cheerful voice "Let us begin, Champion April." I said with horror "I-is this one of your funny jokes? If it is you did great! Ha! Wonderful now let me go." I started to shake as of the little I could.
    Morty laughed but stopped at looked at me. "A joke is it? Then you MUST be the punchline." He gave a mean, dark smile. I was crying and shaking. He slowly pulled a small, bloody knife from under his scarf. I had no Idea what in the WORLD was going on. The chains on me started to loosen, and free me. "April, You stay at the door" Morty said looking at me then at Umbreon. I was scared to see what would happen. He snatched Umbreon and squished the collar into her neck deeper to see at the exact spots was were she was bleeding, badly. He took a step back and held the small knife in his hands and then started to cut around the rings of her. She was in pure pain as I heard her cry. I couldn't stand to watch so I turned my head not wanting to see what happens next...
    He picked up the shaking, bleeding black Pokémon and put it on a table,Strapping it on the table. He held his knife and slowly cut along the side of her. She almost used an attack be he hit her with a hard wham following. She stayed quiet and said nothing. The insane gym leader started to cut at her ears. When the flesh and skin got loose he ripped them off. She was now crying tears as blood mixed in. She was shaking unknown what to do. The bloodied creature was frozen. He opened the spot were he cut. I saw him rip a ribcage out of her. I chocked a little then threw up in my mouth a small bit. I heard the cracking of bones breaking. The insane gym leader stopped and picked up a needle filled with a green liquid. A black cross bone was on it. He stabbed it into her and she took a few deep breaths and fainted. He dropped the needle and started to rip the innards out of her. I watched not moving my head. I couldn't stand it, and I threw up. I lied on the ground shaking and crying. Blood was poring from the table and slowly moving towards me. I started to cry. Umbreon gave her last breath as Morty ripped out her heart. I heard it clear as day. I was terrified if this will also be my fate..

    Sorry about my horrid ability to create derpy Creepypastas ._.'
     
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  2. Havendre

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    The imagery certainly is gruesome! D:
    That poor Umbreon.
     
  3. ScrafAndSigil

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    Lol, Thanks. I kinda draw stuff like this all the time, But I don't write alot.
     
  4. Pokechu

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    What Havendre said though, poor umbreon!
     
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  5. ScrafAndSigil

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    Thanks Agian!
     
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