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Another silly story by me

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Synthesia, Dec 27, 2014.

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  1. Synthesia

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    Heres a story...
    And of course I am not very good at writing things.\





    At the Pokémon center...

    Me: Yo ma'am what is even this place, looks like a Pokémon center.

    The Pokémon center lady (TPCL): No... its way more diffrent...

    Me: LOL weirdo.

    TPCL: Your moms house This is the pokeman centre.

    Me: Are you having vocal problems? Jeez how did you even get a license at this place.

    Me: Anyways, I want some egg nogs. How much is it?

    TPCL: Egg nogs? They are about $500 pokepoints per drink.

    Me: Okay. I need to hurry like santa going across the northern pole or the speed of light x mass.

    Narrator: Suddenly chansey comes out.

    TPCL: This is chansey. She will give you a drink, which is egg nog. Her name is chanseysaurus.

    Me: Sounds like a dinosaur. Well, I gotta rest my pokemans.

    Narrator: TPCL robs the egg from chansey's pocket.

    Me: ....... U serious? YOUR MIND HAS BLOWN INTO SMITHERENES. Yo ma'am,
    thats illegal, you heard me, ILLEGAL.

    TPCL: Want some christmas yams or what?

    Me: I want a special order you never seen before.

    TPCL: You mean your favorite, jams and yams.

    Me: NO. I WANT JAMS ONTOP OF YAMS, fried in PANS.

    TPCL: ooh baby a triple!

    Me: Where's the eggnog? You know my raqyquaza is hungry.

    TPCL: Well here it is. Chansey's egg nog special.

    Me: Its just eggs. Carefully touches it. *Got burned.

    TPCL: Its boiled in 300oC.

    Me: WHAT are you going to do this with my burned finger? Pay for this!

    TPCL: Aint nobody got time for dat: Gangsta style. *puts sunglasses.

    Me: Darude Snowstorm plz no I fan ã… ã…  Well I need to go.

    Chansey: Chansey chan! (Bye bye!)

    Me: yea yea yeah yams. I need to go right, to the hospital that Mr.Looker went inside.

    I few up in the sky with rayquaza. I looked at my phone and I suddenly fell down.
    I crashed like a wrecking ball out of nowhere.

    After 2 hours.....

    TPCL: Youre back! Have some egg nog.

    Me: Your mom.

    TPCL: And your giratina's here, you didnt get it.
    If you want your giratina back, it will cost your family.

    Me: thestrugglewasreal. *Munches a cookie.
     
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  2. EverchangingArcadia

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    Um, I have no idea what I just read, which might be the aim of this, but I could be entirely wrong. Whatever the case, it's, what can I say, lacking? It's nice of you to include the disclaimer at the start, so I know a bit of background before reading, but overall, its not that great in my honest opinion.

    I picture this as a short or small scene of a bigger story, which to me adds a bit of flare and fun to it. (An entirely random one).

    Anyway, I don't utterly detest it, but somehow I kind of like it in some way. (Weird characters, with odd personalities... I kind of like those types of people, not sure why though.

    If you do more, and I happen to notice, I'll read it.
     
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  3. Synthesia

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    EverchangingArcadia, I will give you a tip. Never read Synthesia's stories. xD
     
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  4. EverchangingArcadia

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    I don't know, but I somehow liked it. Just me? Okay...
     
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