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Fanfiction Battle Scars (Eeveelution Warriors

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Pikachulover0927, Jun 19, 2018.

  1. Pikachulover0927

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    I’m thinking of writing this story on Wattpad about these Eeveelution Clans that fight each other. The story will be similar to Warrior cats but with Eeveelutions, but I need a Prophecy.

    The main character will be about an Eevee who will eventually evolve into a Jolteon. He is an Eevee who lives in a nursery with his parents and siblings but he wants to live with the Wild Pokémon (similar to how Fireheart starts off because he’s a kittypet first off but in this story they’re considered Pokepets)
    So I need a prophecy that has something to do with Thunder or Storms. Anyone got any ideas?
     
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    Hmmmmm, maybe look up some stuff on Wings of Fire they have a similar situation with waring dragons with all these clans and stuff. You may find some way to make an electric Pokémon prophecy by reading up on the material.

    I do, however, have some suggestions. Maybe make Umbreon war with Flareon over territory in a desert. The desert is of high heat so it would cater to Fire-types by keeping a healthy body heat and for comfort as well. The reason for Umbreon is that maybe they can kind of be like wolves, even though they are foxes. They are nocturnal and could travel in packs like wolves to ambush Flareon. The reason the two are at war would be strictly for food since the desert is a bit scarce. I would also portray Umbreon as intelligent, fast, and powerful when fighting, yet shy when docile. Now for Flareon. I think they'd be cocky and much more powerful than Umbreon since they have more firepower (sorry for the pun, but I have to). But to balance them out, they are quite simple minded. They would Umbreon in physical combat but have tempers and can be blinded by rage, which is why the Umbreon would last so long.

    I think that Vaporeon and Espeon would be more peaceful and stay away from war. Espeon are just as intelligent as Umbreon but are pacifists. They believe in peace, preserving their environment, sharing equally, and solving confrontations with the well being of all in mind. Vaporeon would keep away from the war since they have no reason to, They're aquatic so no other Eeveeloutions would bother them so they find no point in fighting. They only attack when attacked, are quite proud and are stubborn. Maybe they'll join the war if the main Jolteon shocks the water and kills some of the population, starting a war with Jolteon.

    I would give my two cents on the other eeveeloutions but I'm lazy. :/ But if you actually take this stuff into consideration and ask for my creative input on the whole personality thing then I'd be happy to share. However, I'm most likely full of it and you will probably brush off these ideas because they are bad and I should feel bad.... (Yeah, that's probably the reason)

    Adios
     
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    Okay I’ll check that out.
    I love the ideas about the personality things. I’m thinking that Sylveon would also stay away from battle since they don’t like getting into battles anyways.
    Leafeons love taking care of the environment is all I’ve got for them. Glaceon can be a little cold hearted at times and live in colder areas.

    Thanks for the input as well :P
     
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    Glad I could help! If you need any more input from me then feel free to ask! I need the friends...........
     
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    More input would be helpful
     
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    Expect to receive some more input but you gotta give me a bit. I'm trying to upload the prologue. of a fic I've been working on.
     
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    Okay.
     
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    Going off of Arod, Wings of Fire does actually have a prophecy about 5 young dragons who are going to save the world, but are kept closeted inside a cave. (I've only read 3 books in the series so keep that in mind)

    It goes like this


    When the war has lasted twenty years...
    the dragonets will come.
    When the land is soaked in blood and tears...
    the dragonets will come.



    Find the SeaWing egg of deepest blue
    Wings of night shall come to you.
    The largest egg in mountain high
    will give to you the wings of sky.


    For wings of earth, search through the mud
    for an egg the color of dragon blood.
    And hidden alone from rival queens,
    the SandWing egg awaits unseen.


    Of three queens who blister and blaze and burn,
    two shall die and one shall learn
    if she bows to a fate that is stronger and higher,
    she'll have the power of wings of fire.


    Five eggs to hatch on brightest night,
    Five dragons born to end the fight.
    Darkness will rise to bring the light.

    The dragonets are coming...


    I highlighted all the 'key' events of the prophecy in blue, but the point being you can write something like this for Eevees. There was an Eevee in the Pokémon Adventures manga who could turn into all 3 of its Kanto evolutions, so maybe you can write something with that.
     
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    Yes I’ve heard of Vee. I’ve already wrote something like that with an Eevee named Faith who can turn into all the Eeveelutions and back to an Eevee.

    The prophecy thing sounds cool but I’ll probably have something a little shorter.
     

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