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Discussion in 'Art Corner' started by BluetailsTheBuizel, Oct 29, 2017.

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  1. BluetailsTheBuizel

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    This is where I'm posting original hand-drawn buizel content. Hopefully I'm getting feedback from real people this time.

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    my_beautiful_snivy_drawing_by_tanyuliang-dacto5t-1.jpg Mom? I want some iScreem!

    Hello, Ladies, Snivy here, and this is a not-so-good drawing of me sleeping on a pillow.

    Based on a random tumblr image I saw a long time ago http://yingyingflame.tumblr.com/post/141641367623/isuzu9-i-want-your-attention-this-is-what

    From: http://fav.me/dacto5t
    20171030_180304.jpg I originaly wanted to draw Buizel in a stadium. But I think that's too hard to draw so I draw him in the rain instead. I might add a city skyline in the background the moment I've learned how to drew one
    20171030_180452.jpg Get it? XD
    buizel_went_fishing_by_tanyuliang-d9s2wda.jpg Frustrated that he could not manage to hook a fish with a Fishing Rod, Buizel decided to dive into the water.
    As a Sea-Otter Pokémon, when it comes to fishing underwater, his skills are top-notch.

    From long ago on: http://fav.me/d9s2wda
    Keep checking back! I will be uploading new art on a daily basis. ...unless I'm busy.
     
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  2. ShinigamiMiroku

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    Aww, Snivy's so cute! ^_^ Unfortunately, I'm not much of an art critic, so I couldn't really give any tips for improvement... :sweat:

    What do you mean, 'real people'? Were you getting replies from automated reply-senders last time? :/:
     
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    *I don't have much to say. That snivy is really cute, though.
     
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  4. BluetailsTheBuizel

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    Even worse:furious:: I uploaded my art on Facebook, Twitter, Deviantart, but I got no replys. Its insane that your art can't be easily seen by alot of people the moment you post art on any of these websites if you're a newbie. (except facebook, where most of my audience are my family and reletives, but that was not enought.)
     
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    This is a really good snivy!!! There’s not much to critique !! Although if you do want feedback maaaybe try wearing down a side of your colored pencil so it’s flat before you start coloring in things. It helps get rid of those streaky pencil marks! (Also don’t press down super hard, build up the color. That can help get rid of those nasty streaks too)

    ITS SO GOOD THO I LOVE
     
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  6. BluetailsTheBuizel

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    Ok, thanks for the feedback, but I can't see any nasty streak lines in my drawing, I was trying to blend in a few colors that's all.
    20171030_180304.jpg I originaly wanted to draw Buizel in a stadium. But I think that's too hard to draw so I draw him in the rain instead. I might add a city skyline in the background the moment I've learned hiw to deaw one
    20171030_180452.jpg
     
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    MOM I WANT ISCREEEEEEEEEE--

    This is great! My favorite is the snivy. As usual, your art is better then mine.
     
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    Just Keep Uploading Your Drawing Or Just Introduce Your Drawing To Them-At First,I Don't Received Enough Attention As Well.But I Put Deviantart As My Digital Portfolio-The Thinking That Lead My Profile Page A Bit Known For Others.
     
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  9. BluetailsTheBuizel

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    I draw this a long time ago. But after finish drawing, Is there anything to improve? I mean, I haven't complete yet, but am I going off track somewhere?
     

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    Unfortunately, it takes a lot of time and patience for people to notice your art. Don’t get too worked up! Just keep drawing and posting your stuff and some is bound to see it!
    I have hung around dA long enough to know people kinda just ignore stuff and move on. But just keep posting C: I promise it works
     
  11. BluetailsTheBuizel

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    Ok, but is anyone going to tell me how can i improve on my art work, especially this one? :)
     

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    Maybe try darker outlines with pen and stuff. Also try different styles. The more you draw, the better you’ll get. Also sometimes it helps to look at reference photos.
     
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    You're a really good artist and really proficient at sketching. Keep up the good work!
     
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    I like that Snivy very much!!
     
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  15. BluetailsTheBuizel

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    I'm no longer posting my art here, as I decided I should post my art to just one place. You can find my artwork here: tanyuliang.deviantart.com
     

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