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Critique my story: Battle of the Fire Drake

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Strytho, Feb 23, 2017.

  1. Strytho

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    This is where I hope that you will make any and all comments you have about my story. Note that this was originally written in 2 parts so it will take me awhile to post it all at about 24 chapters per part.

    Feel free to leave your thoughts and feeling and thank you for reading!
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