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Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Goldy, Aug 21, 2015.

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  1. Goldy

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    A.N, Welp. I may be new here but not new to writing. aha, no. I've been writing stories since 1st grade. I'm dead serious. Now the only issues you may see is grammar, and that is something you can blame school. I've been stuck in a horrible school that didn't teach me grammar, let's just say, VERY well. I don't like it either. Anyways, this fanfiction is something I wrote on another site as well. Not fanfiction.net

    I do not know how I can prove to all you mods and stuff, but I do own this work.

    Well now that that's over, I will like to send out a disclaimer and warning.

    Warning: This story is rated PG13 You may want to ask you're parents permission to read this if you're less then 13.

    Disclaimer: I do not own Pikachu, Flynn, Pit and Meta Knight. I also am including all other characters that are in this story. I DO NOT OWN THEM! THEY BELONG TO BENDAI NAMCO TALES OF STUDIOS AND NINTENDO! OR SOMETHING ELSE!

    *coughs* now let us move onwards!

    Little notice!: for this first chappie-- er no wait, this is a prologue. I had someone help me edit it. It may have a few mistakes here and there aha. *slaps self*

    Prologue
    "Humans are just our gods that play with our lives.

    They don't care if we die because we just respawn.

    Do they ever ask themself why they are doing this?

    And do they ever think that they are torturing us, killing us even?

    No..... We are only pixels.... They never thought as us.... as one of them...."

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    It was a bright normal day in the city of glitchington. Video game characters were walking left and right, greeting each other with 'good morning' 'hello' and 'sup?'.

    Honestly, Meta Knight couldn't find a day more perfect to sit in a tree and read a book. It was his favorite thing to do when he's not being controlled by a mere hu- excuse me, god.

    All video game characters called the humans controlling them their "gods" since all they do was played with their lives and controlled them from behind the scenes.

    Meta Knight was just about to finish the chapter he was reading until something unusual suddenly made him jump.

    "I AM BATMAN AND I WILL MURDER ALL BUILDINGS!" a certain blue hedgehog screamed as he ran past Meta Knight

    Meta Knight was clearly confused. He knew Sonic was stupid, but not this stupid. He would never blow up a building! Or, er... Murder it in this case. But this was Sonic, yet again, and he does weird things. So Meta shrugged and went back to reading his book.

    So Meta shrugged and went back to reading his book, soon stopping once again as he began to hear strange... noises... And much to his surprise, he saw characters falling to their knees as they glitched; some were even bleeding

    Meta Knight was very confused. What on earth was going on? It was like Missingno attacked the town!

    "What on Dreamland...." Meta questioned as he stared at his surroundings. Quickly, Meta placed his book in his cape and started to fly away, hoping to find the cause of all this glitching

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    "No Pit! It says 'shroomish' not 'shoe!" A blond scolded the dumb angel.

    "Flynnnnnnn! Are you SUUUUUURRRRRRRRRE?" Pit whined.

    "I'm a hundred percent sure!"

    "But what about the nine hundred that's left?"

    "But what about the 900% that's left?"

    "What on Videogamelaxia [1] are you talking about now......"

    "Aren't you a thousand percent sure?"

    "You never say 'I'm a thousand percent sure,' you say 'I'm a hundred percent sure'! That just sounds wrong!"

    "It's not my fault I died young and didn't learn these things!"

    "It's not my fault you're so dumb!"

    Flynn and Pit went into utter silence as Yuri Lowell ran passed them, screaming, "GNEWOIGNWIGNWIOWENFWEIFNEWOIFNWOINFWEION, CANNNNDDYYYYYYYYY! GIVE ME ALL YOUR CANDY OR DIE A DREADFUL DEATH!"

    "What on Videogamelaxia......." Pit said as his jaw dropped.

    What on Videogamelaxia was that? Flynn thought as his jaw dropped. Yuri would never say that!

    "You don't think something happened, do you?" Pit asked while tilting his head.

    "N-n-n-n-nonsense! H-h-he's..... J-j-just drunk that's it....." Flynn said, denying that something bad must have happened.

    "..... Drunk?" Pit asked while still tilting his head

    Flynn facepalmed as hard as he could, leaving a mark on his forehead.

    "You know what....? Let's stop for today before I get a headache...." Flynn groaned in a Spanish accent.

    "OHMIARCEUS, YOU'RE ACCENT CHANGED!" Pit squeaked.

    "Ya got a problem with that?" Flynn asked.... in a cowboy accent...

    "Um, no."

    "Just as I thought~!" Flynn exclaimed in an Italian accent, walking away afterwards.

    Pit stood there, clearly confused. Half of it was because of Yuri, the other half was because of Flynn's changing accents.

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    This isn't good. Meta thought as he flew around the city of Glitchington.

    "Ring around the rosy~!

    A pocketful of posies~!

    Ashes, Ashes~

    We all fall down!" Link sang as he skipped down the sidewalk... While glitching.

    ....... Out of all the disturbing things I seen. This has to be the most disturbing. Meta thought while sweatdropping.... Even if you can barely see his expression thanks to his mask.

    Crash!

    "Arceus Christ Meta watch where your going!" Flynn growled as he rubbed his head. First his hand, now meta's mask. Whats next? A door? .... I shouldn't have said that.

    "You should watch where your going instead!" Meta groaned.

    "I AM. A. WOOORRMMMM!" Marth screamed as he ran past them.

    "i-i-i-is he drunk to?" Flynn shuddered.

    "........ I don't think they're drunk Flynn." Meta sighed

    "So if they're not drunk... that means something bad happened."

    "Yes."

    "And if something bad happened we might have to fix it if we turn out to be the only normal ones."

    "I guess."

    "So we might die."

    "mmmmm."

    "And we will have to save the world"

    "I suppose."

    "None of this is bothering you isn't it?"

    "I'm used to it."

    "Urg."

    "GUYYSS!"Pit shouted on the top of his lungs.

    "What is it Pit?"Meta and Flynn groaned.

    "SONIC BLEW UP 3 BUILDING, YURI INVADED THE CANDY STORE, LINK AND MARTH ARE SINGING CHILDISH THINGS, RED IS GOING AROUND KILLING STUFF AND I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT WE ARE DOING." Pit screamed

    "We are standing around here wondering what on videogamelaxia is going on."Meta sighed.

    "pika! Pika!" A pikachu soon shouts while dashing there way.

    "What on e-" Flynn started before Pit interrupted him

    "VIDEOGAMELAXIA, SIRRR!"

    "Sorry."

    The wild pikachu soon jumped on Flynn's head, and started saying "Pika! pikachu pika pika pika pika!"

    "What?" Pit asked while raising his eyebrow.

    "Translation: You guys! There is a virus spreading out the entire city! It got 98% of the video game population! I think we might be the only ones normal in Glitchington!" Meta spoke.

    Pit and Flynn went dumbstruck.

    "A VIRUS?!" Pit jaw dropped.

    "Oh lovely just what I wanted on my birthday." Flynn groaned

    "IT'S YOU'RE BIRTHDAY?!" Pit screamed

    "NO YOU IDIOT!"

    "Oh."

    "Pika pika." Pikachu sweatdropped.

    "I have a bad feeling about this." Meta sighed, "Like this isn't gonna end well. At all."

    ~-~

    Dictionary: [1]- It's there planet. I made it up so deal with it.

     
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  2. Shada

    Shada netflix binging


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    Repel ★Charizardite X ★★★★Gardevoirite ★★★★Galladite ★★★★Bottle Cap ★★★★★
    This is so adorable
    I can just imagine Flynn speaking in a country accent,and then in an Italian accent
    Sam Rigel is adorbs
    There are a little bit of grammar errors, but those aren't that visible unless you death stare the story to bits, so no worries, haha. As for the caps, on some lines, those add emphasis, but some could say explanation marks do the same. It all depends if you want to use them or not.
    You're a talented writer, and I can't wait till you post the next chap (although I can just scroll through your Wattpad account, haha Not to sound like a stalker or anything)
     
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    Pitmore Mild Internal Pain

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    I litterally squealed right there and then. Can't wait to find out what happens when Viridi Glitches
    You actually made me look up some of the characters for this and read it over again! It's great! Well done!
    I'm imagining Pikachu like Brick the Bidoof from Shinygiratinnaz's 'Cactus' XD
     
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  4. Goldy

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    @[member="Azure"] Thanks so much ^-^ I'll get to work on grammar errors, as soon as I can c,:... Which won't happen soon considering how lazy I am. :sweat: ahahahaha....
    As for talented, I dunno, I don't really think I'm 'talented' X,D. I mean maybe I am but I dunno o_o

    @[member="Bionic Puppy"] DuDE! EVERYBODY LOVES THE AMAZING ANGEL WHO LOVES HOTSPRINGS AND STUFF! AHA, I NEVER THOUGHT THERE WOULD BE SOMEONE WHO KNOWS KID ICARUS ON HERE. I have many many plans I tell you. Manyyyyyyy
    But anyways, thanks so much X,D. At first I wasn't sure if it was even a good story since nobody really told me :s

    Basically summing it up, thanks so much you two for the reviews! I will have more once I get my bud to be my editor haha.
     
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