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Eve of Evolution Story feedback

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by VicTheJolteon, Sep 11, 2018.

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Is Eve of Evolution a good read?

  1. Yes

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  2. No

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  3. Didn`t read it.

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  4. Needs a little work.

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  1. VicTheJolteon

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    Eevees

    Of all the Pokémon, they are considered the oddest and most versatile specie, able to evolve many different ways into many different elements,

    Though like all Pokémon they cannot return to their original form,

    However, there was one Eevee that made an exception to that rule,

    And in being such was predestined at birth to embark on the grandest adventure ever begun by any Eevee,

    Before or since…

    This thread is dedicated to any and all feedback that its readers would like to give on it.

    You don`t have to comment if you do not want to, but I would really like some input for the story so as to round it out.

    Here is a link to the first chapter so you guys can read it if you so choose: https://www.deviantart.com/victorlincolnpine/art/Eve-of-Evolution-Chapter-1-721198447
     
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  2. ChocoChicken

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    It's really nice writing and all, but why is this in the Roleplay Institute? Shouldn't it be in Literature Library?
     
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  3. VicTheJolteon

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    Eric
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    Umm, oops, I must have not looked at what section of the Forum I was in when I posted this thread.

    You wouldn`t happen to know how to relocate a thread, would you?
     
  4. ChocoChicken

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    It's alright - I made that mistake once, too!

    As for relocating a thread... I don't know how. I know that mods and the staff can do it - that's what happened to my first thread.
     

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