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Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Airenee, Sep 28, 2014.

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  1. Airenee

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    I've read this idea before and I thought that it would be great to try.
    I know many of us fanfiction writers thrive for reviews, or should I say all fanfiction writers want it.
    So I'm writing to ask if anyone wants to participate?
    I'm always open to read and review upon request.
    I'm not a flamer. I'm really conscious of flames.
    I had one once, it took me a few days to bounce back.
    I give pretty good in-depth reviews, as to plotline, grammer, etc.
    I'm not harsh. :)

    Also this gives us opportunities for reading material and possibly new fanfiction friends.
    ...and that's all I can say. I'm gonna go sit in a silent corner for talking too much.
     
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  2. DIO

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    This is a great idea. I cry myself to sleep every night I post a new chapter and get no reviews.

    This be mine:

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9826084/1/Pokemon-Adventures-Renegade

    I don't particularly care if it's chapter by chapter or just one.

    I don't know how many I'll be able to get done, I really need to muster up the fortitude to hit the books hard.

    First up, These Friendships We Share- still reading.
     
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  3. Warrior of Hope

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    This is a great idea. Readers never review unless it is a story written by the Fanfiction gods, I swear. :sceptile:


    Reviews-

    Secrets of the Night- read and reviewed
    Pokémon Adventures Renegade- read and reviewed
    These Friendships We Share- read and reviewed
    Shadows of the Past- read and reviewed
     
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  4. Malc Modnar

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    Yessssss!

    You have my wholehearted support. Little is more frustrating than trying to find one's mistakes when nobody gives constructive criticism. Count me in.

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Shadows of the Past

    Reviewing:
    1. Airenee's Secrets of the Night (read and reviewed)
    2. Gengar's Grin's Pokémon Adventures: Renegade (reading)
    3. ThatPsychoticPichu's These Friendships we Share (will read)
    4. Warrior of Hope's A Hoenn Adventure (will read)
     
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  5. ThatPsychoticPichu

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    Is it okay to participate even though I got over a hundred reviews on my first story?
    I want to participate, everyone deserves reviews..
    I don't really need much reviewing, but I do want to help others so~
    Reviewed:
    1.)Airenee
    2.)Gengar's Grin
    3.)Warrior Of Hope
    4.)Malc Modnar
    I guess I'll put my story here, just for fun~
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10713283/1/These-Friendships-We-Share
    I think I put the link right, oh well xD! Anyways, you are all great authors! You can review if you want~
    THIS IS FUN!
     
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  6. Airenee

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    Yay! Thanks guys!! :D

    @[member="ThatPsychoticPichu"] - sure! I got a story before that reached 100. It was a Franticshipping story. Now, I'm currently focusing on my OC story which needs more love. I've never reached 15 readers , and you might probably guess the amount of reviews that I can get out of that.

    To minimize posting, we'll edit our posts.
    I'll do mine in this post since my 1st post is long and I have to explain this.

    So here's the system that I thought of.
    We'll post our story link here and below it, will be the names of people you already reviewed.
    You can also ask whether you would prefer per chapter review or one overall review at the end.
    I can do either. I don't mind.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9774281/1/Secrets-of-the-Night
    Reviewed:
    1. Warrior of Hope (Hoenn Adventure & Here With You) - read and reviewed!
    2. Gengar's Grin (PAR) - read and reviewed!
    3. Malc Modnar (PMD: Shadows of the Past)- read and reviewed
    4. ThatPsychoticPichu/ PichuTheMadHatter - reading (gradually) :D
    5. Dragon of Vale (Requiem of the Fallen Dragon) - read and reviewed!
    6. Astraldragon (Destiny) - reading
    7. Scriffignano (Pokémon: The Untold Story of Arc) - read and reviewed!

    I'm fine if you read and then reviewed at the very end, but I'd appreciate if it is per chapter or just specific ones. Quantity is great.

    Please and thank you. I'll look yours up after you posted and I'm back from review classes.
    I like reviewing per chapter, it helps me summarize the story's growth, plus it helps me keep track as to where I ended last.
    So watch out for my review spams.

    And please don't hate me for the corrections. I also went through this during my first fanfic. It really helped me a lot,
    and I hope to extend that to other people
     
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  7. Warrior of Hope

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    I'm reading Secrets of the Night right now, but I will read everyone else's after.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10613422/1/A-Hoenn-Adventure

    Reviews per chapter would be nice, so if something is wrong I can change it. If anyone has an OC they would like to send in, the form is on my FF profile.
     
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    You guys are making me feel horribly guilty since you wrote all those nice reviews and I'm unable to immediately reciprocate due to being swamped with work. :(
     
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    It's fine. I'm only a sophomore, so I don't have much work: just free time :sceptile:
     
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  11. Airenee

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    No worries. Review when you can :)

    P.S. I reviewed everyone, hope you all didn't find it harsh or something. :(
     
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    It's alright, I only cried for a few hours. :P

    First review done. Working on getting to the rest of these as I can.
    I feel like a bad person. All these people write long-winded reviews on every chapter, while I only write a single, moderate-length review at the end. See, this is why I should just give up on the whole "having a conscience" thing. Too much trouble.
     
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  13. Airenee

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    Hey, no worries. :)
    It's not like all of us have free time.
    And besides, I feel bad for having posted the longest one. :/
    But I do wonder what happened to the other fanfiction writers here.
    It's been really quiet in the Literature library section.
     
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  14. Malc Modnar

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    I noticed that as well. I think people don't realize they can comment on the threads there. :P
     
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    There. I finished reviewing everyone's story. I really do like them all. You all did a great job writing. :D :ninja:
     
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    Do you mind if I join this topic? It is very interesting.

    For me;
    1.Airanee - Secrets of the Night (Read and Reviewed)
    2.Gengar's Grin - Pokémon Adventures: Renegade (Read and Reviewed)
    3.Warrior of Hope - A Hoenn Adventure & Here With You (Read and Reviewed)
    4.Malc Modnar - Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Shadows of the Past (Read and Reviewed)
    5.ThatPsychoticPichu - These Friendships We Share (Read and Reviewed)
    6.AstralDragon - Destiny (Will read soon)
    7.Scriffignano - Pokémon: The Untold Story of Arc (Read and Reviewed)

    And this is mine.
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10729032/1/Requiem-of-the-Fallen-Dragon

    Thank you for your reviews! I love it! Everyone gives me wonderful reviews!
    And everyone's story is very good too!

    -Dragon of Vale

    P.S. The first time I read each story, if it has several chapters already, I will do an overall review.
    But after that, I will do the chapter review once the new chapter is posted.
     
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  17. Airenee

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    Actually, we'd really be happy if you did.
    We've been wondering for sometime about what happened to the other fanfic writers.
    Anyway, not many comment or review in LV fanfiction section.
    Thanks for participating, I'll look yours up in a while. ;)
     
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  18. Warrior of Hope

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    The more the merrier!
     
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  19. Airenee

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    Yeah, what Warrior of Hope said.
    If you have a chance, feel free to look at the Help Section.
    Sometimes, we are in need of OCs for our stories. :)
     
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  20. Warrior of Hope

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    I actually currently need OC's so if any of you have some it would be appreciated.
     
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