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Five Nights at Freddy's: The Nightmare Begins.

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  1. Fear

    Fear â—Š Galactic Glitches â—Š

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    Warning: Violence, Fear, Swearing.
    Characters: June Swift, all FNaF animatronics.
    Prologue
    UK, 1987, 3 Jan.
    The Pizzeria is Closed. Destroyed stuff, Paintings and other things are inside. The poor people lie outside this Pizzeria, Kids cry wshen they see that their favorite dolls are Inside. They are destroyed too. A little child named Luna used to love this Pizzeria. she asked her dad to go inside, and... They went. Luna ran to the main hall and she saw the three robots. Chica the chicken, Freddy Fazbear, and Bonnie the bunnie. Then, they started playing music. Luna was shocked. A loud scream was heard. "Daddy! hel--" Something stopped Luna's words. her dad ran to save her, but Luna disappeared.
    Chapter 1. "The Newspaper/Let's start"
    UK, 1992, 7 Sep.
    5 years passed, and the newspapers still write about Luna's disappearance.
    "We need a Night Security Guard/Nyctophiliac for Freddy Fazbear's Pizza. Legends say that the animatronics there are evil, and they kill humans. So we need a brave Person, with no fears to do the job we offer. Adress~ ****" .
    "Brave enough? I am!" June said, while he was reading the newspaper. He grabbed his phone and called the adress that the newspaper was showing.
    Later that day
    June was ready to go inside. Or not. His hands were shaking while his suit started getting wet from the rain. He looked the sky and said slowly: "Shall I go in? Why am I here?". When he went inside, he heard scratchings and a scary laugh. He ran in the office and went under the desk. He gasped while he was ready to give up. But he remembered his words. "Brave enough? I am!". He was ready. June found the tablet and started searching. When he saw chica coming, he ran away, from the opposite direction. He didn't know what was happening. The laughs were starting to slow down. He was afraid... "Help!" June shouted while he was hiding in the Pirate Cove. Suddently, the wooden sign writing "Sorry.. Outta Order" Changed to "IT'S ME!" June was so afraid. He ran to escape but the laughs started getting bigger and bigger all the way to the backstage. Something unbelievable happened. Nobody was in the show stage.
    Inside the backstage there were masks, all looking to June. It was creepy. An unusual sound of footsteps and a heart were heard. A shadow of freddy was painting the wall with fear. June hid behind a box, hoping freddy couldn't see him.
    But freddy didn't even enter the room. The four animatronics, chica, bonnie, foxy and freddy started playing music, hoping June'd leave the backstage to see what happens, so that they can kill him. That was their plan to kill the annoying insect that is trying to play the "Dedective" inside this damn Pizzeria.
    The clock showed 6.00 a.m. Finally, June could go to the ofice safely, so he could sleep.
    (Chapters will be added in tshe main topic in spoilers, not as comments.Also, I'm not going to write a lot, I'm gonna write like 7 lines maximum)
    (another chapter comming soon!)
    (If you see any typo-s please tell me!)
    (Updated the chapter 1, please read!)
     
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    I like how yours is going,it definitely gives a sense of fear.That was also a very good use of a cliffhanger,keep it up Teami!
     
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    Thanks, [member="Thunder"] ! (or primal.. Can I call you primal?)
     
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    (I don't mind which one you call me to be honest!)You're welcome.
     
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