Growing up is hard. Wouldn't it just be better to run away? After a fateful run-in with a mew, eighteen-year-old Lily Stone finds herself far from home, stuck with an unfriendly incineroar, and more importantly, turned into an eevee. It seems like a dream come true -- until her family wants to know where she is. Yes, I have two comics! Haphazard! is set in the same universe as, and is a spin-off of, my other comic, The Stars Shine Bright. It's new with only three pages at the time of writing this. It updates on Saturdays when I'm available to make pages for it, but due to being my second project, TSSB takes weekly priority. Just a fair warning in case I miss some weeks! For now, let's dive right in! Spoiler: Page 1 Chapter 1, pg 1 - Cause For Alarm
Chapter 1, pg 3 - Morning Routine this page has been up, but updates have otherwise been slow due to having a lot of things going on recently
You have a really strong talent for making scenes feel alive. Details as small as spreading jam on toast, dried leaves on the walk, the coloring of Mom's hair. It feels alive, you clearly don't take the easy way out, and it shows! I'm watching this thread now like I should have clicked months ago.
Chapter 1, pg 6 - New Idea that's the face of good things to come ----------------------- @Absolute Zero THANK YOU!! i wanted to try and put a little more into my scenes here. they're still a little lacking sometimes but those are baby steps, and baby steps are still steps. character design is easier for me 'cause i have easier times picturing people SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG, i know this comic goes months between updates sometimes but i'm still aliiiiive
Oh, hey! We finally get to see a Pokémon in this Pokémon webcomic. I was wondering how long it would take. Now I'm just looking forward to the plot finally kicking off! Also, it would appear that I haven't actually commented here yet, so I just want you to know that I really like your artwork. This comic already feels almost professional-level.
Chapter 1, pg 7 - Better Reckless Than Late IT IS TIME FOR GOOD IDEAS -------------------------------- @BeZaRre well there were pidoves on the very first page! pidoves are just very plain looking and THANK YOU??!!?? wow omg that's one of the nicest compliments i've ever gotten
9 - Right to the Point 10 - Traffic Jam i mentioned in my other comic thread that smackjeeves had a whole thing so some images are broken now. catch up on them here: http://haphazardeevee.thecomicseries.com/comics/1