So I am trying my hand at writing again, for the first time in over 7 years. For the story I am writing, I need the cheesiest pickup line that is modern, charming and has a little country flare. Can anyone help me find the perfect line to use in my story? The line would be written on a coffee cup, so it can be a bit more embarrassingly forward since it would just be read but at the same time a bit tame.
Well, if its a coffee cup (assuming it takes place at a cafe)... Do you work here? Because I like you a latte OR I must be a snowflake, because I’m falling for you Good luck! ;v;
Coffee huh? I did get my dad one that had the quote "Give this day, our daily brew" What can I say? I'm Roman Catholic XD
As much as I love(d) coffee, as cheesy as my humor is, and as much as I try to be a romantic, I actually don't have any cheesy pickup lines for a coffeehouse. I would always go for more of romantic mistique. My style would be to get black coffee (light roast, not that it matters, but it's still called black coffee), then I'd take a long smell or sip and say "just as I like it: black as night, hot as the sun, and strong as love". It's actually a variation of a Turkish (I think) saying on how coffee should be prepared/consumed, except it's orginally hot as hell, rather than hot as the sun. I just think the day/night dichotomy adds some poetry and overall positivity the whole thing. I don't know if it works for the character type you're working with, but if you can't use it in fiction, maybe it will work in reality instead.
I saw this one on a cup not that long ago: 'Nice mug you got there!' I highly doubt this is what you'd be looking for, but you never know.
Just an idea that came to me. Not sure how well it will fit though. I'm not good with writing pick up lines. "How much sugar was added to this? Because its as sweet as you."
"Drink my love as you drink this coffee." Sounds good? "Drink me too while drinking this coffee." What about this one? "This cup is so lucky to have your lips on it." Yeah?