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Help-Writer's Block!

Discussion in 'Creative Zone' started by Shada, Dec 6, 2015.

  1. Shada

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    Oh no-! Writer's block has risen from the depths of the darkness and is interfering again with your writing!​
    For those needing help with the usual writer's block, we writers are here to help!​
    Just post in the piece you're having trouble writing, and we'll see what we can do to assist, whether it be plot, or words!​
     
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  2. Pirate Captain

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    umm, I guess I have a problem how to start with a story, which I want to re-write
    its a shaman king story, and ive written it some years ago, but now I want to re-write it and make the story more sense.
    I only do not know how to do it
    its about asakura Hao and Ironmaiden Jeanne, they get married after they long time batteling they found out that there in love.
    However the Xlaws and the Hoshigumi/Hanagumi doesn't like the idea.
    Only Yoh group, *Funbari inn and Team The Ren are happy for them.

    In the end they do succeed, and they get married. But after some years Hao betrays her,
    mostly the ending doesn't make any sense, why he does it. so yeah that is that my problem, hope i can gt some help
     
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  3. Manaphymajic1999

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    @[member="Shady Pirate"]; Shaman King? I'd have to read/watch that before I could help you there...
    However, if you send me a message with a link/the story, I'll read through it and I may even be able to help you before I catch up.
     
  4. Pirate Captain

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    I shal link it to ha when im on my laptop
     
  5. Manaphymajic1999

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    Cool beans! I await it eagerly.
     

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