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Lillie's Adventures: A Pokemon Comic

Discussion in 'Art Corner' started by ElsaRivrwood, Jan 21, 2017.

  1. ElsaRivrwood

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    Hi I'm doing a comic manga thing. Enjoy!
    Also, any comments or criticisms are welcome! I'm gonna need help to get better at this after all.
     
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    This sounds interesting, do you already have a good plan for how you will proceed? Your artwork looks cute and amazing I can't wait to see more.
     
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    I really love the way you draw Lillie and Gladion, it is so adorable!
     
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  4. ElsaRivrwood

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    I do have a sorta-plan. I have certain main characters I want to add as well as a few character arcs I want to have happen, but I'm still thinking over some important things like who the big bad evil dude/team should be. I should really figure that out soon...

    Also, thanks! Glad(ion) you like it. To you too Cadbberry!
     
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  5. ElsaRivrwood

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    Number 2! I don't have much to say... Bye!
     
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    Oh Arceus, this is beautiful! Absolutely love this story! Great start... :)
     
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    That pun... Thank you for the puns XD
     
  8. ElsaRivrwood

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    ANOTHER! Congragulations, you will now experience the first "hiatus" These three were all ones I already made, so from now on everything will be new.
    Also, more puns!
     
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    Page 4! Have fun!
     
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  10. ElsaRivrwood

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    Page number 5! We're in a bit of a slow spot, just wait. Soon.
     
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    Loving this little comic so far, I can't wait to see her get to explore being a trainer
     
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    Omg this is great xD I'm totally gonna follow this, great job so far
     
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    She's gonna be the very best. Or maybe second best.

    Thanks! I try to do one per week, so the general "schedule" I try to stick to is once every weekend.
     
  14. ElsaRivrwood

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    Exposition! Kinda... Things will happen soon, promise.
     
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    See, action! I always stick to my word! Also, I might not be able to upload the next one on time next week, sooooo yeah. It'll happen when it happens.
     
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    Poor Charmander. With Lillie for 2 seconds and already under attack. I'm so excited to see how this story develops.
     
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    I love this concept! I'm excited to see this story develop further. There's a lot of potential that could come from this, considering Lillie's background.
     
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  18. ElsaRivrwood

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    Hey! I'm back! And shtuffs goin' on! I was just on a vacation for a week and a bit and I couldn't get one done, so I just skipped last week. But still, Enjoy!
     
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    Omastar! My favorite fossil Pokémon! How can you hurt Lillie though?
     
  20. ElsaRivrwood

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    Woah! Who is this mystery guy and why does he call his pancham "Despie"? Despie sounds nothing like pancham... It's as if he's speaking another language or something! (10 arbitrary-and-pointless-awesome points to anyone whoever can guess where he's from)
     
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