LV Art Critique Thread

Ever had a drawing or a WIP of a drawing you're working on and need some suggestions for? Maybe you need another artist to give their perspective before you continue? Never fear, just post an image of your work here and we'll do our best to help!

Rules of course
1.) Keep all wip images SFW
2.) If it's a large screencap, make sure to put it under a spoiler tag
3.) When critiquing be constructive and caring, LV is your family.
4.) Do your best and provide examples if you can!

Good luck everyone! Let's improve on art together.

 

@[member="brsajo"] That actually looks really good! You executed those thin and thick lines really well. How do you ink so smooth??? Wow. I'm envious.

Since it's drawn in the MLP style, I'll only judge it as such.

• The part of the mane closest to the ear looks a little flat, maybe at some bounciness to it and stretch it away from the head?
• The illusion of depth in the eyes is outstanding, but the one on the right could be adjusted farther away juuust a little and then it will be even more awesome!
• Over all your pony anatomy is really good, keep it up!