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Original My Heart for the Samurai

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Teddybear2345, Oct 3, 2017.

  1. Teddybear2345

    Teddybear2345 Which is cooler, to be cool, or uncool?

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    Something I did for a music songwriting contest.

    My Heart for the Samurai
    What I require is love
    What I desire is the heavens
    sword in my hands
    swamped in blood
    the lives of my enemies help manifest its powers
    caked in a raw steel, topped off with a sharp finish
    the samurai sword is brutal when utilised

    the samurai is outstanding, when alone like the wolf
    mountains call his heart home and his home is yours and yours alone
    When the stars shine, so does your soul bright
    in all the right places

    the end of the world and you
    I just want to feel the sword once more
    cut me into ribbons
    spread throughout the galaxies
    and the lore told to my children's children

    my mind wavers for the samurai song
    the beating is consistent and logical
    of my swallowed up mind state
    I stare into the mist
    and come out a new being
    made whole again

    Just like my samurai and his sword

    so brutal, so technically sound
    without a sound, I hear its wrath
    on my strings of a violin
    forevermore

    Feedback appreciated and advised. Thanks!
     
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  2. Knightmare

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    Pretty good lyrics! As cliche as it sounds I can perfectly picture this is in a heavy/power metal album.
    My favorite part is this:
    It's so easy to picture the lone warrior walking down a snowy path, sword and mind ready to attack, heavy but determined steps. Gotta repeat myself but great job, I hope to read more inspiring lyrics from you:thumbsup:
     
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  3. Teddybear2345

    Teddybear2345 Which is cooler, to be cool, or uncool?

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    Thanks for the compliment(s) and feedback friend!
    I have written a fair amount over the years.
    So I will show when ready and able of course!
     

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