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Needing an Help Writing the Entrance of my Pokemon Hunter duo

Discussion in 'Creative Zone' started by Nova Ozuka, Jun 6, 2018.

  1. Nova Ozuka

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    I need help writing the entrance of Heather and Drake, the latest additions to the Pokémon Resonance cast. Heather is based off James while Drake is based off Jessie. I tried looking at the Team Rocket Trio's various mottos, but haven't managed to come up with anything yet. This is all I've got so far:

    Drake: "They say it wasn't hard enough already..."
    Heather: "But we can't agree more!"

    If you have any suggestions, let me know!
     
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    why not check out jessie and james rivals Cassiedie and butch as well
     
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    Unfortunately, the only one I can find for Butch and Cassidy is nearly the same as the one first used by Jessie and James, which doesn't really help.
     
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    oh sorry i guess i cant really help you then sorry :(
     
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    Are you trying to write their version of the Team Rocket motto? If so I'd say look at what you gave them which separates them from Jessie and James and incorporate those traits into their motto, while still referencing the original motto (maybe use the old rhyme scheme or have that "to denounce the evils of truth and love" section brought up.) Also if you need more inspiration, have you ever listened to the 'Full' version of the song? there's some extra lyrics in their that could help.
     
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    Well, the first two major differences is that they're just a pair of Pokémon hunters, and not part of a team like Team Rocket, and the second is that they don't have a talking Pokémon either, so we don't have anyone speaking in place of Meowth. That being said, any motto that can be written up will probably be only loosely based off of the Team Rocket motto. Of course what separates Drake from James is that he's the poverty stricken one instead of Heather whereas Heather is the one with the rich family.

    I also decided to make Drake just a bit of a muscle head since he obviously wouldn't have many of the same interests as Jessie. I haven't really developed their characters much yet of course. As for Team Rocket's Rocket, I believe I have that one on CD, so as far I'm aware I've already listened to it several times.
     
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