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New Story In The Making

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by GarchompIsBlaziken, Aug 6, 2013.

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  1. GarchompIsBlaziken

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    A few days ago I started writing a story. The story is about a group of teens who discover that they have special powers. Shortly after their powers start showing teens are taken away by the government and discover the rest of the group. They are all amazed that there are others like them. The government plans to use them for an elite task-force, and that's all i'll tell you for now. I will most likely post the actual story on here as well.
     
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    Might be cool but unless you put some real unique story elements in there it sounds like you are basically writing X-Men or that show Heroes.
     
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  3. GarchompIsBlaziken

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    I definitely have a few tricks up my sleeve to "spice up the story."
     
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