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I haven't read full episode, i am on page two but is great. The cocept to coming from different planet is awesome. And then mystery dungeon. I will tell you propperly when i will complete reading it. Up so far it is fabulous.

 

So, as I said, I will tell you once I will complete reading the episode so here I am. All chapters were good and I loved the way you write dialogues. They are easy to understand and explains best what is going on. I really liked that you live suspense at some points giving reader a chance to guess and it also increases reader's interest. I liked the ending too, giving the reader a reason to read ahead and making it more interesting. As a whole and in short, I loved it. I will start reading Munna's ressurection tommorow.

I spent 2 hours reading it and time passed in a flash because story was interesting and great.

 

Hey...
Well, I just caught up with all the chapters and stuff, and I have to say, it's really good. Keep it up