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Pokemon Black and White- my oc Onyx

Discussion in 'Roleplay Institute' started by CilanLover15, May 13, 2014.

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  1. CilanLover15

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    Hello Everyone! This is the information of my oc Onyx, which she's known as the Legendary Pokémon Princess! (I'm writing a story about it, so if anyone wants to read the first two chapters, you can read it!) Ok, here's her information!

    Name: Onyx
    Age: 15
    Looks: dark black hair to her waist, light green eyes, pink pale
    skin, gold necklace with three purple heart pendants, white
    fingerless gloves, purple and yellow tank top, purple skirt with
    red leggings, bubble blue, red, white and yellow shoes
    Personality: loyal to her friends and family, brave, fearless, kind,
    cute, funny, a very skilled Pokémon trainer, pretty, hilarous,
    smart
    Likes: Taking care of her Pokémon, goofing around with her
    friends, friendly battles, competitions, dancing, singing, training,
    swimming
    Dislikes: Team Rocket, Evil Pokémon trainers, being humilliated,
    giving up, getting late, crazy fangirls
    Her flaws: She can get jealous when some girls try to flirt with Cilan. When she gets angry, her eyes get "on fire" and a fiery aura appears around her. When she loses to a Pokémon Battle, she tries to not to be sad, she walks alone for a while to calm herself down.
    Affiliations: Champion (she won ALL the badges from all the
    regions, even she won all the Pokémon League)
    Nicknames: Legendary Trainer, Cutie, Techno Dancer, Moonlight
    Queen, Pokémon Princess
    Birthplace: Pallet Town (Kanto)
    Family:
    -Vanessa (Mother)
    -Rick (Father)
    -Annabelle (Cousin)
    -Rose (Sister)
    -Wynonna (cat)
    Pokémon:
    -Glameow
    -Luvdisc
    -Bulbasur
    -Vaporeon
    -Meganium
    -Flareon
    -Rapidash
    -Glaceon
    -Mismagius
    Friends: Misty, Dawn, Brock, Ash, Chili, Cress
    Crush: Cilan (shhhh!! don't tell to anybody!)
    Rivals: Georgia, Iris, Montgomery, Trip, Burgundy
    Enemies: Team Rocket



    I hope this information can help you to meet this oc of mine!
     
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  2. ThaIssing

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    it's not to be mean or anything, but I would really like to hear some of her flaws as well, right now I only see the good traits listed.
    While I'm still a noob at making characters I do know that flaws are an importen part of the character too. Could she be a bit selfish at times? or prehaps a short temper? I would really like to know :)
     
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  3. CilanLover15

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    Ok, first, that was really mean. Second, she sometimes gets jealous when some girls try to flirt with Cilan. She gets really angry. Besides, she has a deep crush on him, eh?
     
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  4. ThaIssing

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    sorry if it felt offensive in anyway, it was in no way intended. ):
     
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    Character flaws are perhaps the most important part of character-building. It's important to remember that.
     
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  6. CilanLover15

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    I know, i know. jeez, i'll put it now. -.-'
     
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  7. CilanLover15

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    It's ok, ThaIssing. It's all my fault, i didn't wanted to be mean to you. It's just i was angry at myself for some stupid school stuff.
     
    #7 May 13, 2014
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    "Dislikes: Crazy fangirls"

    Yeah, I can relate to that...
     
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  9. CilanLover15

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    Yeah, Onyx reaaally hates crazy fangirls. Example: The fangirls of Striaton City. '^^
     
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