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Pokemon: Tales of Time.

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by PlatoXaiver, Jun 2, 2015.

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  1. PlatoXaiver

    PlatoXaiver What did he forget? What did he remember?

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    Bii? First big writing Project...bound to be some errors or cliches in some places, and bound to be not very good, but with your help and criticism I hope this will turn out fine...enjoy ^^.

    "Ugh, where am I?" I say, standing up after being unconscious for whoever knows how long. I awake in what seems to be a log cabin. "How did I get here?" I say as a frantically look around. "What day is it?" I ask, "Tuesday, June Second," a voice from afar said. I look over and see a young woman with blue eyes, bright pink hair, and a red bow in her hair standing next to my bed. She wore a long light pink dress with a white apron that had a red cross in the middle, "I found you outside, so I decided to take you in," she smiled. "Wouldn't want anything bad possibly happening to you, now do we?" I was very confused, I could have sworn I had just started my Pokémon adventure yesterday. "What's wrong?" the woman says to me, "You look a bit confused." I look around the room for a moment..."It's nothing, it's just..." I hesitate for a second..."I had just received my first Pokémon yesterday from Professor Karui an-" I'm interrupted by the woman, "Professor...Karui?" She looked very confused. It's surprising to see someone who doesn't know him. "Who exactly is that?" she asked in a confused tone. "Professor Jeff Karui, son of Professor Cecilia Karui, don't you know him?" When I said that she looked even more confused, her face just spelled I don't know what you're talking about. "There is a Cecilia Karui in this town." she says, "But...she's far too young to have a child, she's only 13." At this moment as confused as she is, I awake In a strange log cabin, in what looks to be an Inn. There are about five beds in here and two windows on each side. I find a strange woman stating she found me, unconscious outside and..."Miss,"I can hardly get the words out of my mouth, somehow I summon them, "May I ask...what's your name?" She gives me a big smile, "You don't know? Why I'm the Nurse Joy of Orchid Town." At this point I'm not only confused, but down right terrified my face pale white, my body is heating up and I'm sweating badly. "Nurse Joy," I'm terrified, the words were hard to summon up, but once again somehow they come out, "What year is it?" She looks at me like I'm an total idiot, I don't blame her however. "Gee kid, did you hit your head or something, it's 1956."
    My heart sinks and crashes, breaking into millions of tiny shards that individually cut through my insides creating a painful sensation. "1956," I say "You're lying right?" At this point I'm in complete denial, my body has heated up and I'm sweating all over, it feels as if I'm wearing climbing gear in a sauna. "Look kid, I'm pretty sure I know what year it is." She shoots me a sharp glare, sharper than a Beedrills stinger, "and I'll be damned if a kid I found unconscious is going to tell me otherwise." Gee aren't Nurse Joy supposed to be nice? I think to myself. "Anyway I think it's time you leave, you've been here all day and you seem to be fine." So much for more customer service... "Anyway, that'll be 200 Poke kid." I had to let those words sink in for a few seconds, paid service Pokémon Centers..."Isn't this supposed to be a free service?" I say with a very sarcastic tone. "Free?" She gives me a slightly crazed look, as if I just killed someone, "Look kid, this town is lucky just to HAVE a Pokémon Inn, this isn't some free service, we have to afford all this stuff some how, maybe someday there will be some magical machine which heals Pokémon in a few seconds, and that'll be free, but as long as we have to heal you trainer's Pokémon with money out our own pockets, this service will be paid." Magical Machine huh...I pay Nurse Joy, then hightail it out of there. Once outside...I could clearly tell...I wasn't in Kansas the Sakura Region anymore.
    As I opened the door, a quick cold gust of wind gently blew my crimson red hair back. There was no doubt about it anymore, I was in the past. The town was in the middle of a forest, more green than anything. Everything I knew about my hometown was not there yet, brand new, or simply just now being built. How did I even get here? I think to myself, The only thing I remember is getting my first Pokemo-I interrupt myself, "My Pokémon, I almost forgot about her." I reach into my pouch and take out a Pokémon. "Alright Tsuagi, come out!" The Pokéball opened and out came Pokémon Number #722, Tsuagi the Grass Rabbit Pokémon. (Tsuagi is a small Pokémon, rabbit like. It's body is light green and it has a darker green cape like coat covering its back in which tiny flowers sometimes grow. It's ears can extend and be used as whips.) "Tsu..." The Pokémon said rubbing its eyes. "Cute as ever," I say picking up Tsuagi, cradling her in my arms. "I'm gonna let you stay outside your Pokéball for a while, hope you don't cover my jacket with fur agai-"

    Everything Goes White...
    50 years in the future...
    (Aka, before some of this happened.)

    "Wake up!" I hear my sister's voice say as I'm still stuck in a deepish sleep. "Hey! Get up!." There's a thud...and a sharp pain in my right arm. I open my eyes and find myself lying on my floor, it's cold...I groan and slowly pick myself up. "Did you have to wake me up like that sis?" I say to her, rubbing my right.arm. obviously still tired. "Well excuse me price of laziness." she said with a snobby tone, crossing her arm, "but aren't you the one who told me to wake you up early so you won't be late getting your first Pokémon from Professor Karui?" I stare at her with a blank expression, "Oh yeah." I say scratching the back of my head, "So, what time is it then?" She looks over at my clock "Late O'Clock." My eyes widened as I look over at my clock, "6:45AM..." I stare at the clock without any expression, It takes me a minute to realize th-"Crap, I'm 45 minutes late!" I rush into my closet grab my black jacket and quickly change into some jeans. "You better hurry up, or-" I rush past my sister, jacket in hand..., but I feel like I'm forgetting something. "Shoes." My sister screams down the hallway. "Those can wait!" I scream back at her, "Pokémon are more important than shoes!" I rush down the stairs, through the kitchen, and out the door.

    My Pokémon Adventure Begins Today.

    I rush down the path to the Professors laboratory, spotting many Pokémon along the way. As I approach the lab, I spot my two good friends Leo and Mia standing outside it, holding a Pokéball and a brand new Pokédex. "Woah," I say in a surprised tone, "so you two already got your Pokémon huh?" I get a bad feeling in my stomach. Guess I really am late. "Yeah, dude." Leo says giving me a light punch on the shoulder. "But," Mia interrupts, "We made sure Mr. Karui didn't give the last one away, just for you!" She said with a smile and a twirl. "Thanks guys," I say to both of them while smiling, "You two really are the best!" I go past them running inside the lab. "Professor!" I scream "I'm here for my Pokémon!" I keep running until I meet a tall man in a lab coat, short black hair connected with his also short beard. "Professor Karui!" I say brimming with excitement. "Yes yes, I could hear you from outside child." He says, staring me up and down. "Red hair...green eyes, you must me that Que kid?" He says looking at me confused. "Y-yes." I stutter. "My name is...

    Que Taymor.

    Characters so far:
    Cecilia Karui:
    Age: 13
    Height: 4'9
    Hair Length: Mid Length, barely past her neck.
    Hair Style: Pony Tail
    Hair Color: Turquoise
    Eye Color: Lavender
    -Tomboyish and Competitive Nature.
    -She's short, obviously. Don't call her it, she's quick tempered.


    Tsuagi:
    Pokémon Number #722
    The Grass Rabbit Pokémon
    Height: 1'0
    Weight: 6lbs
    Color: Light Green
    Eye Color: Yellow
    These Pokémon are very timid but friendly, they live in groups and always stay together. Outsiders are also welcome in the group. Despite small and weak in appearance, these Pokémon can deliver strong whip blows with its whip like ears.

    Leo (Leonard) Richardson:
    Age: 14
    Height: 5'5
    Hair Color: Brown
    Hair Length: Short
    Eye Color: Blue
    Ques childhood friend, very rowdy and head strong.

    Mia Davis:
    Age: 13
    Height: 5'2
    Hair Color: Black
    Hair Length: Short
    Eye Color: Grayish
    Another childhood friend of Que, she's very shy and secretly has a...interest in him.

    Que Taymor:
    Age: 14
    Height: 5'4
    Hair Color: Red
    Eye Color: Green
    Hair Length: Mid Length
    You'll learn about him as the story goes on.
     
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  2. Thunder

    Thunder The Alolan Archer

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    Woah!The story confused me at the start,I didn't know what you were heading too but the ending,1956!This story will do well,I know it!
     
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  3. PlatoXaiver

    PlatoXaiver What did he forget? What did he remember?

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    Ok, ok. I finally got around to updating this.

    Chapter 3 is out and I finally established a name and.gender for our main.

    I also added a thing with...very tiny character details.
     
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