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Smoggy Skies: A Pokemon White Nuzlocke Comic

Discussion in 'Art Corner' started by Salad, Oct 16, 2016.

  1. Salad

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    This is my White Nuzlocke comic that I've been doing. I've decided to start posting it here, too.
    It's a sequel to another, but you don't need to have read the first one to enjoy this one.
    NOTE: Pages 2-7 look terrible. They were made 9 months before the others and I'm working on redoing them. For now, just try to ignore how bad they look.
    Here's a link to fan art I've received for the comic!
    Enjoy!

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  2. shinygiratinaz

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    This comic is awesome! It's pretty funny while also keeping to a rather serious tone and concept. Can't wait to see more of this! :D

    RIP Sylvia you were great while you were here :'(
     
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  3. ShiroLugia

    ShiroLugia ✂ No Longer Human.

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    Omg, I love seeing how your art improved, and this comic is amazing!! Please PLEASE post more of it! It's so sad to see a character go, when you give each Pokémon such life and personality...;;; I'm inspired!
     
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  4. Salad

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    aaaaaaaaaa oh my gosh okay so i just had some info to post and a collection of bonus arts i've done for the comic since the main run is probably going to end up being hosted in game journals after this week and this will more or less become a place for me to post bonus arts and stuff.

    @shinygiratinaz: aaaaaaaaa oh wow thank you so much that means a lot to me ;; it's really nice to hear that right off the bat!!

    @ShiroLugia: Definitely!! i update on sundays!! look out for it!! hsdbjhdffbsdhjsbdf your support is so encouraging thank you!!!

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  5. Weedle Enthusiast

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    This was enjoyable to read. Nice job! I'll be keeping an eye out for more of this.
     
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  6. ~Nova~

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    This is great! I hope to see more soon! :D
    (Sorry for the generic review, because honestly, this is awesome)
     
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  7. Salad

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    Hello everyone! This week has had some ups and downs for me, but I finished the page!!
    My computer shut down like 6 times and made me lose a lot of progress but I persevered because I love you all.


    @[member="Endrew Swiftwind"]: Thank you!! You give me the motivation I need to continue!
    @~Nova~: thanks!! don't worry about it being "generic"! it still made me feel good!!


    And here's the page!

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  8. ShiroLugia

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    Omfg I love your gijinkas so much, they're all very original AND I LOVE IT!! GEOFFERY IS OBVI THE MOST BAE CHARACTER. I can't wait to see the collab update of your comic!!❤️❤️
     
  9. Salad

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    Today, my friends, I have for you two pages!! One of which is a collab page! Each panel drawn by a different artist!

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    First Panel: ShiroLugia
    Second Panel: AgentNein
    Third Panel: dogvillage
    Fourth Panel: Huntress Wizard
    Fifth Panel: DoktorGilda
    Sixth Panel: Squibblenaut
    Seventh Panel: Bug
    (Apparently more people I know have LV accounts than I thought!)

    And here is the next page as well <3 <3

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    I'll see you guys next Sunday!!
    -Salad <3 <3
     
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  10. Salad

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    Hello, my dear readers! It's wonderful to see you here again.
    Sorry I am SO LATE on updating... Pokémon Moon happens... lol...
    I'm so tired! Here's the page, my lovely reader!

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    Wasn't that nice? I like the way that page came out... Huge thanks to AgentNein for sketching out the background on the last panel... I couldn't have done it tonight otherwise.
    If you like the comic, leave a comment telling me so~
    I feed on your words~
    I love you guys!! Thank you for reading. Until this Thursday~
    -Salad <3
     
  11. shinygiratinaz

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    Burgh being a drinker is something I now accept in my personal headcanon. XD

    You have really great comedic timing in this comic, I love it!
     
  12. ShiroLugia

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    I'm loving every bit of this Salad. Your dialogue is SO CLEVER AND THE EXPRESSIONS ARE SO GREAT,,, sobs I was so honored to work on that panel for youuuu. THIS COMIC IS LOVELY AND SO ARE YOU❤️
     
  13. Salad

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    Hello, my friends! I have made another page, just before Sunday is over (my time)!

    @shinygiratinaz: aaaaaaaa thank you!! you're so kind to me;;

    @ShiroLugia: YDGFSHDFNJSKDFJSDNF THANK YOU //// YOURE SO WONDERFUL

    Page!!!! For you!!!!

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    I like this page!! Everybody got a chance to talk (except Hawes but he's a nerd haha) and I'm satisfied with how it came out visually!
    I hope you enjoyed!! I love you guys!! Until Thursday!!
    -Salad <3 <3 <3
     
  14. Salad

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    Hey guys!! Happy new year! I'm back to making pages!! School was kicking my ass for a while but IM OK NOW I THINK

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    Until next time!!
    -Salad <3 <3
     
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    I'm really dizzy but here's another page!!
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  16. shinygiratinaz

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    Burgh seems to be slowly transforming into a liquid state :o

    Also gosh dang it I really hope Pignite's gonna be okay D:
     
  17. East

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    @[member="Salad"] your art for these is fantastic. I really look forward to seeing you progress even more, and I really enjoy the premise of this comic you've made :)
     
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    Haha I really appreciate the facial expressions :'D
     
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    Hello I don't mean to be a bother but the pages 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 22, 29, 35, 38, and 39 aren't working just to let you know.
     
  20. Wizard

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    Hey, welcome to Lake Valor! The author of this thread has not been here in over four years, so chances are that they will not be able to fix the pages. Sorry!
     
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