Finally after a long year, I have finished my first real fanfiction that I like. That's right, the Eev of Conquest is complete. With the closure of my story I thought I would end with a discussion thread. Please comment below on the story. Did you like it or dislike it? What parts did you like, dislike, and hate with a burning passion? Who was your favorite character? Least favorite character? Why? Please give feedback on my writing style so I may improve in the future. Any spoilers please put in spoiler tags. I will start with my own thoughts on the series. I am on the fence with it. I feel like its not a bad story, but I could have done a lot better. There were ideas I wanted to flesh out, things that never got worked on, some things I forgot to add to the story. I thought the action scenes were great and that I fumbled a bit on the dialogue sections. Overall, I don't dislike the story, but I was aiming a lot higher and fell short. What are your thoughts?
