Once upon a time, there was a female character that that was perfectly normal and relatable, except she was also special and unique. She spoke to her boyfriend, "I love you." And then killer robots appeared. And then we all died. The end.
I relate to the part where everyone died, it just really spoke to me on an emotional level. It's also really good that you gave your main character flaws, you don't want another Mary Sue on your hands. Will you be doing any sequels?
CALL THE PUBLISHERS! WE GOTTA GET THIS TO THE PRESS NOW! *calls press* STOP EVERYTHING AND LOOK AT THIS FANFICTION! #MissingNo
This is the most beautiful fanfiction ever. I didn't cry at the end like some people because I didn't care about the characters relationship, BUT THE WRITING IS SO BEAUTIFULLLL!
Oh please; you have nothing on the likes of Doomhound and LostSpirit. If you're going to make an attempt, you can at least try.