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The Origins of the Darkest

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Xarn, Nov 5, 2014.

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  1. Xarn

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    Before you get a little angry with me I will tell you that I only want to learn English and make a good history. In my language I often write many histories about everything. The use of the literature allows me to create a new world, a new life, a new paradise or even a hell, this resource is my way to be...a god.
    I will upload more pages if you like.

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    All begins with a little boy without friends. That boy was me, Esler, and I only was 8 years old. In those days I lived in a little village known as "Peaceful Wood". There we had bakers, carpenters, smiths, and many other people that loved the innocence and peace that reigned in the village. The people were responsible, adorable, and there wasn't any problems. The Village was a little place inhabited by both human and Pokémon, the harmony between them was great, and they helped each other in whatever the other need.
    The days were always the same, I played alone in the dark and the other children disturbed me when our parents didn't see.

    Often, I could survive the disturbing, it was part of them and I didn't have problem with that, because I knew that I was better than them and they didn't deserve my attention.

    Usually, the children tried to disturb me when I was alone, it was easy to disappear in the front of their noses, and almost funny. When they were unable to find me, I started to explore around the village and imagining the world outside of there, thinking about the Pokémons dispersed around the world and all the beauty that this place had hidden in its every corner.

    Every night, my only tool to know the world was my imagination. It was enough for me, because I was young and there is no better thing that the imagination of a little child. I was happy, even if didn't have all that I needed to explore that unknown place, because my imagination was enought to dream.

    But one day, all this changed.

    I was doing my favorite thing: play with the Baker's Pokemons, that was the best part of the day, I could play with them, and also, I could enjoy learning about the Pokemons .When the play ended, I returned to home, but, while I was returning home, one of the stupid children threw a stone at the head and I started to cry. I didn't know what to do , so started to run , I ran and ran and kept running, because, in my mind, I knew that I belonged to another place, and then I started to fall, I was falling in a hole without end, there is when she appeared. It was a Kirlia that was using Psychic for save me. I didn't know why but I felt like she was an old friend, and then, she talked:

    -Hi, my name is Kirlia, I know that it isn´t common that I can talk but, please, don't be afraid of me- She told worried

    -I'm not afraid of you, but, you can talk- I told while i was wiping my tears.

    -And, Are you not scared by the fact that I can talk? - She asked.

    -No, you are cute and adorable, and I love that you can talk- I answered.

    -Oh thank you! — She told while she hugged me.

    I felt much better after she hugged me. Nobody but my parents had hugged me like that.

    -You are cute and adorable too,What is your name?- She continued.

    -I am Esler- I answered

    -I like your name, but what are you doing here?- She asked

    -I was running because I don´t have friends and nobody likes me- I aswered

    - Don't worry, I will be your friend, i like you- She told while she smiled

    -Really? Are you being serious?- I asked happily

    -Of course- She answered

    Since then all had changed, I had a friend nothing else mattered and when the other children tried to disturb me, It wasn't the same because i had Kirlia for help me and make me feel better.

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    An Special thanks to Endrewswiftwind for helping me with my BAD English.

    I hope you like it and if you not, I will try to be better. Thanks for reading.

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    Good job. The one thing that is killing me, is that you still haven't removed the word "me" from "threw me a stone at the head". It should be "threw a stone at my head". A couple other minor one's, but that is just killing me. And not with laughter. Like what KK does to you upon entering shoutbox.
     
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    Thank you for the help :)
     
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    Your welcome. Once Lake Valor's PS is back up wanna have a battle? Wow that seems out of place on this thread.
     
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    I will keep battling you to the end of LV...in other words...forever xD
     
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