1. This site uses cookies. By continuing to use this site, you are agreeing to our use of cookies. Learn More.
  2. Welcome to Lake Valor!
    Catch, train, and evolve Pokémon while you explore our community. Make friends, and grow your collection.

    Login or Sign Up

The Past that is Jarzair

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by PokeMaster1, Feb 27, 2014.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. PokeMaster1

    PokeMaster1 Dragon Tamer

    Joined:
    Nov 24, 2012
    Posts:
    768
    PokéPoints:
    ₽141.3
    Ok so I didn't know where to put this, so I put it in the spam box(put it where ya see fit). So, I had to do an assignment for english and it was making a no rhyme poem on a specific theme. I chose to do Memory and the past, couldn't think of anything, then I thought of Crisis Academy and my RP counterpart, Jarzair. So, I put the poem in his perspective since he is gloomy and depressing sounding in a way. I wanted to share the poem with you guys(it's only 16 lines):
    The Past that is Jarzair
    Just sitting in the dark​
    Trying to think of all good.​
    All I can think of,​
    is the depressing times​
    in this gloomy forsaken land.​
    The pain it has caused me,​
    eats away at my heart every day.​
    Never wanting to return to that horror of a place.​
    The fires, the wreckage, my people....​
    Knowing I shall never see my village again.​
    Thinking about those dead bodies that are scorched,​
    my parent's corpses empty inside.​
    Carrying my weapons made of their bones​
    as I walk down the rocky road.​
    This memory will never leave my mind...​
    My name is Jarzair, and this is my story.​

    If you want to comment on it, you may. It's only the second poem I've ever done in my life and I think telling a story like this and not rhyming will be my best way to go to make these things. Hope you guys enjoy it ^_^.
     
    Stop hovering to collapse... Click to collapse... Hover to expand... Click to expand...
  2. Cobalt

    Cobalt I'M A HURRICANE

    Joined:
    May 17, 2013
    Posts:
    1,729
    PokéPoints:
    ₽64.6
    It's a well written poem, I think you'll get a good grade on it. :) Good job!
     
    Stop hovering to collapse... Click to collapse... Hover to expand... Click to expand...
  3. PokeMaster1

    PokeMaster1 Dragon Tamer

    Joined:
    Nov 24, 2012
    Posts:
    768
    PokéPoints:
    ₽141.3
    Thanks Cobalt, and I actually did get a good grade on it. I got a full 100 on the poem.
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page