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Comic The Stars Shine Bright - An original pokemon fancomic

Discussion in 'Art Corner' started by Pika, Mar 25, 2019.

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  1. Pika

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    After the murder of her mother, Myu finds her world turned upside down as she takes on the daunting responsibility of raising her little sister, Topaz. Luckily for her, however, she doesn't have to go it alone as long as the kindhearted Atticus is here to help.

    Unluckily for her, this unlikely trio of kids may find themselves facing a little bit more than they bargained for.

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    ㅤI may be part of the "Nuzforum Invasion", as it were, but my trade actually doesn't lie in nuzlocking at all! The Stars Shine Bright is a completely original comic about a young mew suddenly shoved into the role of guardianhood, along the way discovering that the world is a bit more strange than she originally believed. The comic combines elements from the Mystery Dungeon games and the mainline games, but in all the ways it does this, you'll just have to find out!

    ㅤI've been doing this comic for 4 years now, and I've learned a lot about drawing and writing over those 4 years. The early pages start out a lot crusty, but that's just how it is for first projects. Lots to show for my progress! Really, lots... nearly 200 pages now, so my hope is to upload at least 3 pages a day until we're caught up with the main SmackJeeves site.


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    Chapter 1: Things Change:
    A young mew must adapt to a new life.
    Chapter 1, pg 1 (1) - Monsters in the Night
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    Chapter 1, pg 2 (2) - Starry Night
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    Chapter 1, pg 3 (3) - A Simple Request
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    Pages 4-7
    Pages 8-10
    Pages 11-13
    Pages 14-16
    Pages 17-19
    Pages 20-22
    Pages 23-25
    Pages 26-28
    Pages 29-31
    Pages 32-34
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    Pages 108-113
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    Pages 225-226
    Pages 227-229

    ... And with all that preamble out of the way, I hope you enjoy!
     
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    //Koolaid man voice

    OH YEEEAH!! I can't wait to reread this comic ALL over again and watch the way not only your art style evolves, but characters and dialog.
    HhHH
     
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    Oooh! I love this! It's so cool!! Ahh! This is going to be reading for quite a while! =)
     
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    I'll be keeping an eye on this. I'd love to see more!
     
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    four more pages (because one of them is really barebones)!
    Chapter 1, pg 4 (4) - A Favor
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    Chapter 1, pg 5 (5) - The Challenger
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    Chapter 1, pg 6 (6) - Chores
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    Chapter 1, pg 7 (7) - The Other Side
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    whoa things already ramping up here
     
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    gonna be lotsa double posting in this thread
    (got some blood in this set)
    Chapter 1, pg 8 (8) - Cold Blood
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    Chapter 1, pg 9 (9) - Ruthless
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    Chapter 1, pg 10 (10) - In the Nick of Time
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    shit fellas. bummer amirite
     
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    Chapter 1, pg 11 (11) - Rescue
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    Chapter 1, pg 12 (12) - White Out
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    Chapter 1, pg 13 (13) - Awakening
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    we got some art jumping around because i replaced some pages that were especially badly written. i changed some early plot points that weren't working out in late 2015/early 2016
     
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    Chapter 1, pg 14 (14) - Realization
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    Chapter 1, pg 15 (15) - Momentary Relief
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    Chapter 1, pg 16 (16) - The Creature
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    oh boy what's that thing??
     
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    in which Myu learns to have some TACT
    Chapter 1, pg 17 (17) - Someone Like You
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    Chapter 1, pg 18 (18) - Jokes
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    Chapter 1, pg 19 (19) - Glow
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    Chapter 1, pg 20 (20) - Baby Mew
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    Chapter 1, pg 21 (21) - Topaz
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    Chapter 1, pg 22 (22) - Speech
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    in which i tried to find a way around Topaz being a baby so i could let her talk
     
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    Chapter 1, pg 23 (23) - Upstream
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    Chapter 1, pg 24 (24) - Moo
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    Chapter 1, pg 25 (25) - The Same Name
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    page 24 used to be my favorite for a long time. i just liked the expressions on it
     
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    Chapter 1, pg 26 (26) - Callaiaster Town
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    Chapter 1, pg 27 (27) - Stare
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    Chapter 1, pg 28 (28) - Ragtag
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    quite the group indeed!
     
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    Chapter 1, pg 29 (29) - No Trouble
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    Chapter 1, pg 30 (30) - Background Conversations
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    Chapter 1, pg 31 (31) - Accusations
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    chapter 1 clips along real fast
     
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    Chapter 1, pg 32 (32) - Thunderbolt
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    Chapter 1, pg 33 (33) - Distraction
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    Chapter 1, pg 34 (34) - Returning
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    what a sweet sentiment. it'd be a shame if someone broke it
     
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    Chapter 1, pg 35 (35) - Stutter For Help
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    Chapter 1, pg 36 (36) - Long Winded
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    Chapter 1, pg 37 (37) - Your Mother
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    Chapter 1, pg 38 (38) - Among the Stars
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    and so we have a much needed quiet moment after everything was flipped upside down.
    that finishes out chapter 1! tomorrow we get to move on to chapter 2
     
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    Chapter 2, pg 1 (39) - Consciousness
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    Chapter 2, pg 2 (40) - Rude Awakening
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    Chapter 2, pg 3 (41) - Sneeze
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    the return of some VERY fun characters
     
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    Chapter 2, pg 4 (42) - Pretty Good
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    Chapter 2, pg 5 (43) - Best Mom
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    Chapter 2, pg 6 (44) - Hunger Pains
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    Chapter 2, pg 7 (45) - Counting On Him
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    Chapter 2, pg 8 (46) - Ice to Meet You
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    Chapter 2, pg 9 (47) - Downpour
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    got some personal stakes going
     
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    You know, it just occurred to me while rereading but your art just bass boosted while you were on chapter two.
    sick...
     
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    Really cool! I just had to catch up on your chapters! So good!
     
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    @ red; yeah!! i got hella inspired by some comics i read at the beginning of the chapter
    @ momo; i'm glad you think so! it gets better the further in it goes too

    Chapter 2, pg 10 (48) - Really Real
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    Chapter 2, pg 11 (49) - Expert
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    Chapter 2, 12 (50) - Pressing Issues
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    it seems to me you are the ECKSpert, mark!
     
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