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Comic The Stars Shine Bright - An original pokemon fancomic

Discussion in 'Art Corner' started by Pika, Mar 25, 2019.

  1. Pika

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    Chapter 2, 13 (51) - Common Courtesy
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    Chapter 2, 14 (52) - A Proper Name
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    Chapter 2, 15 (53) - Outdated
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    and so... we set the scene for their relationship
     
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    Chapter 2, pg 16 (54) - Stretch
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    Chapter 2, pg 17 (55) - Unwanted Guest
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    Chapter 2, pg 18 (56) - Sense of Style
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    Chapter 2, pg 19 (57) - Slam
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    Chapter 2, pg 20 (58) - Theatrics
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    Chapter 2, pg 21 (59) - Transfiguration
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    sooner or later the plot comes calling. or it rushes in and slams into you without warning
     
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    Chapter 2, pg 22 (60) - In a Hurry
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    Chapter 2, pg 23 (61) - Zzz
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    Chapter 2, pg 24 (62) - Sticky Food
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    that's our Atticus!
     
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    Chapter 2, pg 25 (63) - Nothing Serious
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    Chapter 2, pg 26 (64) - Core
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    Chapter 2, pg 27 (65) - Myu's Magic
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    we introduce the magic system!
     
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    I love that you just wrote glow across the page.
     
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    @ momo deep down i still wanna pull from anime tropes!

    Chapter 2, pg 28 (66) - New Form
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    Chapter 2, pg 29 (67) - Big Dreams
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    Chapter 2, pg 30 (68) - Slimy
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    a dragon, but a very slimy one
     
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    Wow, very good so far. The art started out kind of rough but passable and has already improved greatly and its interesting seeing the quality improve as it goes on. The story also seems rather intriguing so far and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
     
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    @BZRich64: thanks! of course, it does get even better since these pages are about two and a half years back in backlog (and sometimes i think these are a little rough too, but such is a learning experience). i'm glad the story is interesting you all! i can't wait to get caught up so you can see what i've REALLY got in store

    Chapter 2, 31 (69) - Final Request
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    Chapter 2, 32 (70) - Variant
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    Chapter 2, 33 (71) - Suicune
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    Chapter 2, pg 34 (72) - Boundaries
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    Chapter 2, pg 35 (73) - Nap Time
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    Chapter 2, pg 36 (74) - Parting Ways
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    Chapter 2, pg 37 (75) - Better Late Than Never
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    Chapter 2, pg 38 (76) - Sleepytime Junction
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    Chapter 2, pg 39 (77) - Mocking Tone
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    too good to be true for ol' Atticus
     
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    Ooh, we getting some Atticus backstory?
     
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    Chapter 2, pg 40 (78) - The Hill
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    Chapter 2, pg 41 (79) - Rollout
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    Chapter 2, pg 42 (80) - Reunion of the Damned
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    backstory or not, it looks like someone's paying a visit ;3
     
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    Chapter 2, pg 43 (81) - Slow Progress
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    Chapter 2, pg 44 (82) - Atticus' Promise
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    Chapter 2, pg 45 (83) - Dark Comedian
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    Chapter 2, pg 46 (84) - Take a Look, It's In a Book
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    Chapter 2, pg 47 (85) - Everything He Seems
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    Chapter 2, pg 48 (86) - Feline Facinorous
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    a new challenger appears...? uh oh...
    and that puts an end to chapter 2! buckle up for chapter 3, because it's a long one but well worth it
     
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    Wow, Myu and Topaz's mom is kind of a racist. Though I guess that was already implied. I'm curious to see what Gamma's backstory is like, as there's clearly a lot going on there.
     
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    yesterday (yes my birthday also) was the 4 year anniversary of The Stars Shine Bright! in that time i've created almost 200 pages and am excited to create more!
    now to get on to today's pages:
    Chapter 3 - Day Out With Atticus
    Part 1: Learning the Ropes
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    While on an outing with Topaz, Atticus gets a little bit more than he bargained for.
    Chapter 3, pg 1 (87) - Pleading
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    Chapter 3, pg 2 (88) - Saying All the Wrong Things
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    Chapter 3, pg 3 (89) - To the Sky
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    Chapter 3, pg 4 (90) - Timely Return
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    Chapter 3, pg 5 (91) - The Edge of a Truth
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    Chapter 3, pg 6 (92) - Clean-up
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    oh that isn't really what he wanted to hear
    chapter 3 is split into two parts! it's a long one, with part one being much longer than part two
     
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    Chapter 3, pg 7 (93) - Secret in Plain Sight
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    Chapter 3, pg 8 (94) - Topaz As Usual
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    Chapter 3, pg 9 (95) - Trying Too Hard
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    in which Atticus monologues his unfortunate position
     
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    Chapter 3, pg 10 (96) - Magic Breath
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    Chapter 3, pg 11 (97) - She'll Huff and She'll Puff...
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    Chapter, pg 12 (98) - ... And Blow His Willpower Down
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    slow down and talk to a baby sometimes
     
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    Chapter 3, pg 13 (99) - Minor Concern
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    Chapter 3, pg 14 (100) - Acquaintances at Best
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    Chapter 3, pg 15 (101) - Missing A Link
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    in which Gamma begins her mission in life (screwing with Clara)
     
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    Me, chanting like I'm in a doomsday cult: Her Her Her Her Her Her Her Her HER HER HER HER HER HER-
     
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    Chapter 3, pg 16 (102) - All That Remains of Me
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    Chapter 3, pg 17 (103) - Forgotten Tale
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    Chapter 3, pg 18 (104) - Foggy Relations
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    Gamma recounts what she knows
     
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    Chapter 3, pg 19 (105) - Saving the Wrong Date
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    Chapter 3, pg 20 (106) - Vanity Break
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    Chapter 3, pg 21 (107) - Going Nowhere Fast
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    Gamma gets distracted
     

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