Trying to get back into making Tags.

So after almost 4 months of not making a single tag, I lost everything, I do believe here, I have made some of my best signatures like this:

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I believe this is one of my better tags along with this:

However in recent times I have been producing stuff like this:

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Which lacks the technique in some of my older sigs, and is really just a spam of C4D's. However today I spent a good time on this tag, and I would like some CnC on it, am I getting back to my old style, what do I need to improve on etc.

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Yes, Danny I kinda made it for you

Thanks, Julian

 

Thanks, this means a lot.
New Sig:

 

Thanks;

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I can make you one whenever you want, for free, Just PM me!