Hiya, uh yeah. So I decided to start a comic, I've never done this before so any advice would be really well appreciated! I only have the first three pages of chapter 1 right now but I am slowly working on the pages. =) Spoiler: cover page Spoiler: chapter 1 Spoiler: pages 1- 3
Very nice! A webcomic is a lot of fun, and fanfiction webcomics have a decent peer group. I can also dig a meta narrative, and I'm curious to see where you go with this AU comic.
I like this so far! Especially your choices over how to split your frames with sequence and visual perspective in pages 1 and the first half of 2 so far. Very dynamic and delicious! The only thing is, these images are huuuge and I can't even see half of a page unless I ctrl+downscroll zoom out all the way. I mean it's worth the effort for me to zoom out, but I wonder if some readers might face a similar problem and not know that option is available. I really need to stop postponing and play this game...
Yeah, I noticed. I'm trying to find a size that works well for the next couple of pages I'm working on. Also don't worry, I haven't actually played undertale. I just...um...maybe know the entire story inside out and have watch like 1500 play it...yeah...I've honestly got to get around to playing it myself! =) Okay! So...I made these pages a little smaller though I still need to find the right size. I'll probably go back at some point after I've found the right size and fix the other pages but for now let us just continue on with these pages. Pages 4 - 6 Spoiler I'll find the right size for my next pages and like I said I'll go back and fix these at some point. What did you think so far?
@Momo Kisaragi Good work Momo! Your linework is getting better and I'm enjoying seeing your artwork posted here!
Hiya! I've not posted in a while and boy...I have done a lot of pages!! Please enjoy (I made the size a little smaller too, I think I've found a size that works but hey we'll see!) Spoiler: Pages 7-9 Spoiler: Pages 10 - 13 And there, I spent WAAAAY too much time on Toriel, but Goat Mum deserves to be drawn well so all the hours!! =) I also hate drawing fire but eh, I tried. What do you guys think?
Heyo! Chapter 2!! I'm excited, I definitely want to put the character information down at the end of this, as it is now. So...enjoy? I did way too many pages oops... Damn, the internet at my house is being dumb so it took a while to get the pages to work. Let me know if any of the pages aren't working, I'll work out how to fix it. =) Spoiler: Chapter 2 cover Spoiler: Pages 14 - 17 Spoiler: Pages 18 - 21 Spoiler: Character Info Chara: STATS: LOVE: 2 HP: 24 ATK: 12 DEF: 10 ARMOR: The Locket * Somehow its still beating. WEAPON: Real Knife * Took long enough. Chara (With Perseverance magic): STATS: LOVE: 3 HP: 28 ATK: 14 DEF: 15 Frisk: STATS: LOVE: 1 HP: 20 ATK: 10 DEF: 10 ARMOR: Faded Ribbon * You don't think you need to worry about the monsters anymore, but you suppose it helps. WEAPON: Toy Knife * You don't need the knife but it completes the look.
Giggles at looks at the last part. Okay, so now I know where I was up to! Please enjoy! Spoiler: 22 - 25 Spoiler: 26 - 31 No change to their stats right now, so we'll leave it, I'm sure you'll love next chapter!
@LeafeonPrincess Well, I would certainly hope so! I personally quite proud of where its going right now! Alrighty lets begin with chapter 3, in which battles are (hopefully) awesome and Undyne is calmly confused. Spoiler: Chapter 3 cover Spoiler: pages 32 - 35 Spoiler: Character Info Chara (With Perseverance magic): STATS: LOVE: 3 HP: 28 ATK: 14 DEF: 15 ARMOR: The Locket * Somehow its still beating. WEAPON: Real Knife * Took long enough. Frisk: STATS: LOVE: 1 HP: 20 ATK: 10 DEF: 10 ARMOR: Faded Ribbon * You don't think you need to worry about the monsters anymore, but you suppose it helps. WEAPON: Toy Knife * You don't need the knife but it completes the look. Undyne(Powered up): STATS: HP: 2500 ATK: 12 DEF: 6
Hoo! Pages! Spoiler: pages 36 - 41 Spoiler: Character Info Chara (With Perseverance magic): STATS: LOVE: 3 HP: 28 ATK: 14 DEF: 15 ARMOR: The Locket * Somehow its still beating. WEAPON: Real Knife * Took long enough. Frisk: STATS: LOVE: 1 HP: 20 ATK: 10 DEF: 10 ARMOR: Faded Ribbon * You don't think you need to worry about the monsters anymore, but you suppose it helps. WEAPON: Toy Knife * You don't need the knife but it completes the look. Undyne(Powered up): STATS: HP: 2500 ATK: 12 DEF: 6
Heyo~ More pages!! Spoiler: Pages 42 - 47 Stats are the same except obviously Undyne has now returned to her normal stats, I'm too lazy to put them here so...google...? Anyone able to guess who that Mysterious Looming Shadow is? Seriously I can't wait to get onto the next pages!! =)
Welp, no one guessed so Imma just reveal it, yes my friends! We are finally getting to undertale's number one OTP! Spoiler: 48 - 54 So what do you think so far guys...? =) I've been waiting forever to finally get to Undyne and Alphys! Ahh! They're too cute!
Welp this should tell you if you're right! Hello all! Update again, now that my internet is being nice! Time for some fun backstory! =) Spoiler: pages 55 - 61 (Once upon a time *Music box* starts here see below for a link) (Song stops here, trust me it doesn't fit past the last page) Spoiler: pages 62 - 67 Link to the awesome music box - I hope you all enjoyed the pages I'll see you probably tomorrow for more!! =) No fighting so no stat update right now, but soon enough. =)
Yup, I was right. Papyrus DO processes the healing of soul. Well, at least I’m your AU. I would guess Undyne never know Toriel is in the ruins before Perserverance told her.
Hello! New chapter!! I really wanted to get to this one already. =) Spoiler: Chapter 4 cover Spoiler: Pages 68 - 72 Now onto trying to draw the skeleton bros that I suck at drawing! This is going to be fun... =)
Welp I'm back to get into this a bit more!! ^^ I promise I'll be more active lol XD Spoiler: pages 74 - 75 I'll get back to updating at least once every couple of days ^^ I've been busy with yr 12 and stuff but we're nearing the end of it now. Edit: and I oop. I realised how big my pages were XD I forget to fix them.