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Comic UNDERTALE AU - The soul of Loyalty

Discussion in 'Art Corner' started by Momo Kisaragi, Apr 17, 2019.

  1. Momo Kisaragi

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    Hiya, uh yeah. So I decided to start a comic, I've never done this before so any advice would be really well appreciated!

    I only have the first three pages of chapter 1 right now but I am slowly working on the pages. =)
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    Looking good so far! I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
     
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    Very nice! A webcomic is a lot of fun, and fanfiction webcomics have a decent peer group. I can also dig a meta narrative, and I'm curious to see where you go with this AU comic.
     
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    I like this so far! Especially your choices over how to split your frames with sequence and visual perspective in pages 1 and the first half of 2 so far. Very dynamic and delicious!

    The only thing is, these images are huuuge and I can't even see half of a page unless I ctrl+downscroll zoom out all the way. I mean it's worth the effort for me to zoom out, but I wonder if some readers might face a similar problem and not know that option is available.

    I really need to stop postponing and play this game...
     
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  5. Momo Kisaragi

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    Yeah, I noticed. I'm trying to find a size that works well for the next couple of pages I'm working on.
    Also don't worry, I haven't actually played undertale. I just...um...maybe know the entire story inside out and have watch like 1500 play it...yeah...I've honestly got to get around to playing it myself! =)

    Okay! So...I made these pages a little smaller though I still need to find the right size.
    I'll probably go back at some point after I've found the right size and fix the other pages but for now let us just continue on with these pages.
    Pages 4 - 6
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    I'll find the right size for my next pages and like I said I'll go back and fix these at some point. What did you think so far?
     
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