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Idealism, a fic I am writing on FF.net

Discussion in 'Literature Library' started by Kaitan, Sep 6, 2014.

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  1. Kaitan

    Kaitan
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    Hello! As I am new to Lake Valor, I'd like to ask for some feedback on an in-progress fic I am posting on fanfiction.net. The link is as follows:

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10136282/1/Idealism

    It's a rather dark mix of manga and games, with a large dash of my own interpretations. So please, don't think of these characters as anyone specific; I've messed with the canon characters' names to help with this. The chapters have been getting longer, and with my current amount of schoolwork, it'll be a while before I can finish the next chapter. Therefore, I'd like to ask my new community what they think of what I have so far!

    (Mention something specific you like/dislike if possible! Feedback is good)
     
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